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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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Lets jump on the critique! *-*
You have a nice sense of perspective, is the first thing that jumps in to the eye.
The characters look dinamic, in a moving pose, and you cant directly see anatomy fails,s
wich is wonderfull in a drawing.
Cell-shadding! Im personally a bit fan of it, even if i dont use it. You did more than one layer of shaddings, congratulations, because thats a wonderfull way to give deep in a drawing.
You used lighting, another point for you!
Even though, i have to recomend you to try and work a little more on lighting types.
What i mean is the next thing; the armor for example need MORE light that anything else
because is naturally a bright object.
In the colors, the girl could have been a little more alive with diferent tones.
When you use a color pallete for base color, you CANT use the same -but darker- to shad, because it end up looking quite boring to the eye.
Example -> Armor white -> Use a soft blue
Dark Blue-> Use a tone of Blue/purple
Yello hair -> Shad with pink.
It may sound extrange, but it does give a wonderfull touch to the final piece.
I hope i have help you a little bit <3
Her pose is odd. Not as odd as it was originally but still odd. I'd never use this drawing in an actual comic.
Really, what I'm looking for right now is general impressions. I don't want to work on a picture that isn't terrible, only to have someone go "oh look it's SO-AND-SO from MOVIE/GAME/COMIC" or something like that.
Do you have any impressions on the characters themselves?
Alright and you are right on the oddness.
Okay, I get it now and sort of but I am hesitant to make guesses right now.
I showed it to some people in the Thumbshare forum. Someone commented that she looked like a more "traditional" hero and that was enough to make me feel pretty okay.
Alright c: though I am partial to the guy since he looks so unique but I can see how the woman looks like the classic hero.
What the heck is that guy made of, mystery meat? (God, it's been ages since I thought of anything related to Camp Lazlo)
I've only seen a handful of Camp Lazlo episodes. It seemed very odd XD
I'm certainly content to wait until that journal entry appears. If it means you and o-rylization figure out everything as best you can, so much the better.