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JYC: Round 2, Page 1

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AUDITION Dusty and Niobe

ROUND 1 Dusty vs Sid and Niobe vs Aquin

ROUND 2 Dusty vs Niobe

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*rubymight was worried I wouldn't be able to keep up traditional work. Hopefully this round'll put those fears to rest! :laughing:

Please critique me to death. This comic is still very much in progress and there are plenty of things I'm still debating. For example, I'm not 100% how I like the digital color correction and keep waffling on how I want to do the word bubbles on future pages.

I did make a conscious decision to remove the TV hyena's antenna. I was going to use pipe cleaners and, long story short, it didn't work out. Hopefully the poor guys don't feel too emasculated.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This is exactly the kind of styling Junkyard City was MADE for. Sure, it's not some stupefying mass of digital artwork that the industry calls for these days. What it IS is creativity at its finest. The different elements of the physical comic itself make for great texturing. I love the rope. The bottom panel looks a tad confusing because the mound of dirt previously wasn't there before. I know what you were trying to achieve there-just be careful. Your use of dialogue (er, lack of) is a great way to tell the story. I don't know if this is the case for the entire round, but it works well on this page. You also showcase Dusty's childlike behavior well-good job!! I can't wait to see the rest of the round. Desp is a tough opponent. I'm sure you'll both do fine.