JYC: Finals, Page 13

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Morty can only appear to one person at a time so Dusty is muy confused.

I went 12 pages this time before deciding words are entirely unnecessary. New record!

In all seriousness, so far, this page is probably the truest to my original plan for my round. I liked the idea of having the adults going through a huge, complex plot but only letting you see/hear what Dusty does. It'd be like this episode of Wilfred where you know something's going on between Wilfred and Bruce but neither one of them feel like telling Ryan what's going on so we're left just as baffled as Ryan. I really want to do a story that way but I don't think it works for a finale, since I could see it being unsatisfying. I edited in a lot of things Dusty wouldn't know into the comics. I like those pages but, if I'd had unlimited time for rewrites, I would have tried to make the whole round more like this page.

If I had added dialogue, I would have referenced Adam's audition in the second to last panel. Idk. I think Adam's listening skills are funny.